If life is a journey,
I want you to be my companion.
If life is a game,
I want you to be my team.
If it is a lesson,
I want you to be my ink, my partner, my teacher.
If life goes on,
I want you to stand by.
If there's another life,
I want you to return with me...
17 comments:
nice...wonderfully written...loved the last 4 lines...ends beautifully..."If thrs another life...i want u to return wid me" simple n it makes itz way straight to ur heart...beautifull...loved it
LOvely yaar :) loved the end :)
But hey...never knew u loved Bombay Times (BT) so much :P BT in punarjanam? hmm
Cheers
CRD
BT must be blushing, no? :P
Short and crisp. How contrary to my style of writing. But I still like it. And BT..well initials.
Cheers!!
The words sound like a heartbeat...true to the core!!
"what if life ends???".........nyways a good, short poem
Thanks for dropping by my blog and leaving such a nice comment:) You are a marvelous writer..I've been reading..and reading...
Hi. Very thoughtful stuff you've put up. God bless!
Well written. The last two lines are simply beautiful.It actually encompasses the whole concept of true love.Nice one.
If life is finding what life is
I want you to find it with me..
Howz that for another two lines?? Anyways, a very nice simple concept written beautifully. Nicely done. Keep writing...
Beautiful!
short and sweet!!
-I
And thats really very thoughtfull of you !!
If life's a book,
I want you to be its Author,
If life is of Expressions,
We want BT to be the reader !!
Hope it reaches BT wherever he is !!
Tc.
BIG OMi
nice stuff. never knew u had a blog too. incase ur havin troubling remembring me... m Anita from school. senior year. wid Raghav n Aditya. nway really good stuff. keep jotting
Annie.
short nice & great..
loved it..
keep writing...
do visit my blog too..
Hi. are you keeping well dear?
Lovely piece...explicitly beautiful...but a very sad way to end it..
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